Minggu, 08 Juni 2014

"Why Teens Smoke Cigarettes"

Factors That Cause Teen Smoking
Why do teens smoke cigarettes ????
Adolescent smoking is caused by several factors that make them intentionally or forced to do something that has not been banned or allowed at a young age they are. Though they know how the dangerous smoking is, which can cause many diseases, self-harm and can damage their own future. But they still do it or remain smoke because they are ignored due to be inflicted after they smoke. And in this modern era a lot of teenagers who have become active smokers that could cause damage to the nation's next. It turns out that there are two factors that make them smoke which environmental factors and factors derived from the self.
Factors that come from the environment. The first is that the environment is caused most or all people who are a chain smoker that affect an adolescent smoking. Secondly, they are forced to smoke because if they do not smoke will stay away from their friends. The third, usually smoking is one of the tools the students to hang out, because smoking is a trend among teenagers today. Fourth, cigarettes are usually laden teenager to be a member of a gang or motorcycle club that requires members to smoke. The fifth, smoking can make friends with smoked by them because they are considered to be a strong or brave. Sixth, fakor unhealthy environments that make adolescent smoking without the harmful causal thinking and harm themselves.
It is all the environmental factors that make adolescents smoke, and there is another factor that makes them feel smoking is a factor of the self. The first factor is because otherwise they will feel embarrassed smoke with his friends because most of her friends smoke. The second is because he feels wants to look cool and make increased confidence. The third one is caused setres and try setres want to eliminate it with smoking. Fourth, because they only try smoking but too often so they become addicted to smoking and if not they will feel calm or confident. The fifth because adolescents imitate their father who is a smoker who makes them feel that they have to smoke like a father mereka.yang sixth is that they feel that they buy cigarettes from their pocket money without asking their parents and feel that why not to smoke. In fact, due to which they bear a very large effect, because they are the people who should be the successor of the nation is good but be otherwise if they smoke.

The factors above is a little picture of the answer to why teenagers smoke. Teenagers are a person who is in the process towards the search for identity, a period in which very vulnerable, which requires a lot of attention and supervision of parents for their children menagarahkan could grow to be a person who grew up with the perfect, which is their future at stake of this process. Will be true or even become worse. Of these factors can be concluded that there are many causes of teen smoking action. So teenage smoking is not asingsekarang thing but if let's just going to make us become the nation's next successor who was not qualified because smoking caused, so that's why teens smoke.

Jumat, 02 Mei 2014

Sixth Assigment

IF I COULD GO BACK IN TIME


                Does not feel much precious time have I wasted all this time , if I could turn back time or a short time in the past a lot of things I want to fix . It turns out that time can not be played back , because so many things have I wasted a lot of useless Tanba think if the time comes I will regret it and want to repeat again the days in which I should not make mistakes . Two years ago, exactly when I was in high school , at the time it is when I know the name of new friends . I have a friend who four people I really care about even no secret that I hide among my friends , I was so dear to them . i always days I pass by them , I was so happy because it has such a good friend . Because after I lost my sister the only one I feel seding and always sad , but if I was always happy with them because there are friends who support me when I'm sad .
                Initially I was the closest to a my best friend , he is a friend that I always rely on. I'm so fond of him even as I think of my own sister . But one day who knows what 's going on , who knows what could he make change even hurt my feelings . But I'm still trying to not believe that what he is doing it on purpose , I think that it was just a lack of alone .
I started again accustom my attitude to it and assume all did not happen . Either a while , probably because I just keep it in my heart that causes me so evil to my friend 's . I hate it , I do not want to know him anymore .
Now I want to fix my mistake at that time , I did not want to make it all happen . I want to make him not to hurt me and I'm also not going to hate it . I once lost a friend who I really care about now , I feel if what I'm doing first is a mistake that might make me regret it to this day .
                 I want to see him again when two years ago , I would not make this misunderstanding , I want to remain friends like before him . Because he is a friend that always makes me understand the meaning and be willing to give up what is best for us and for others . Because friendship is more important in anything like I 've ever read a novel that is written therein " whatever your friends are doing , even if it is not pleasing to you. He's still your friend " . The words which should I read first , even though he hurt me he's still my best friend .
                If time could be turned around, I want to fix everything that has been I miss with my effeminacy to it . I want everything back to normal , back to the moment where I'm always happy , tell all my stories , my sadness , my happy even tell you everything about me and about . Maybe someday it will terwujut , not by repeating the time but when we met each other in understanding the mistakes of the past . My best friend , I miss you . I'm sorry my friend , I wish I could go back in the past I will fix everything .

Selasa, 22 April 2014

narrative text



Narrative Text
1.       Narrative text
·         Narrative text is basically text that tells about something that did not really happen, but only in the reef by Writer. narrative text aims to entertain, to gain and maintain the attention of the reader / listener a story. Narrative text also aims to educate, inform, convey a reflection on the experience of the author, and are no less important is to develop the imagination of the reader / listener. Imaginary narrative text generally, but there are also factual narrative text, which tells the true incidence.
·         Differ from  other  writing genre is in the generic structure:
v  Structure of narrative text
a.       Orientation ,which sets the scene and introduces the characters (it answer question : who,when,what and where).
b.      Complication,in which a crisis or a problem arises,which usually involves the main characters.
c.       Resolution,a solution to the problem (for better or for worse). Here main characters find ways to ways to solve the problem.
d.      Coda which summarizes the point of the story and moral message we may get.

2.      The steps how to make a narrative writing
·         be ready to tell a story 


 


the most important brick of building a narrative text
is a plot or story line after you get the topic in your
hand.

·         Have some type of setting     

you need to describe the setting its physical
Appearance.
·       build your reader impressions of your characters 


 
having a great number of
character will mean you
you don’t get a chance to
flesh them out properly.


·       let the plot unfold    


 


use sensory words relating to all five senses
·       plan your climax, the twist in your story 


 


 it could be a death a secret finnaly   

·         Finish up your story      


 
with shorter narrative essays in particular.
3.    EXAMPLE
Snow White And Seven Dawrfs



Once upon a time in a great castle, there was a beautiful princess. She was very pretty, with blue eyes and long black hair. Her skin was delicate and white, and so she was called Snow White. Snow White had a step mother who was always jealous of Snow White's beauty. Her step mother too was very beautiful, and the magic mirror told her this every day, whenever she asked it.
One day, the step mother asked the magic mirror who the loveliest lady in the land was and the magic mirror answered Snow White was the loveliest in the land. The step mother was very mad. Then he asked her trusty servants to take Snow White into the forest, far away from the Castle and killed her. But the servant didn't kill Snow White, He led the innocent little girl away.
In the forest, little Snow White was alone and scared. She didn't know where she should go. But suddenly she saw a small strange cottage. She wondered who lived there, then she entered the cottage.
Inside the cottage, there was 7 beds and a kitchen. Snow White was to tired to explore the cottage, and suddenly fallen a sleep. In the afternoon, the seven dwarfs who lived in the cottage, came home. They surprised to see there was a young lady there. One dwarf woke her up and asked who was she. Snow White told them her sad story. The seven dwarfs understood the feeling of Snow White and asked her to live with them in the cottage.
Meanwhile in the castle, the servant came back and told to the step mother that Snow White was killed. Then the step mother asked the magic mirror once again who the loveliest in the land was and still the magic mirror answered the Snow White who lived in the small cottage with seven dwarfs was the loveliest one in the land. So the step mother was angry and she planed something bad to Snow White.
Then the step mother disguising herself as an old women who sold a basket of poisoned apples and went to the cottage. In the cottage, the seven dwarfs warned Snow White to not open the door to the stranger.
The step mother finally arrived to the cottage and began to offer Snow White an apple. Snow White refused to open the door but the step mother kept persuade and finally Snow White opened the door and brought an apple then he ate it. So Snow White fallen down with the poisoned apple beside her.
In the afternoon, when the seven dwarfs came home, they were surprised with Snow White who laid down on the floor with pale face and a poisoned apple beside her. The seven dwarfs were sad seeing the Snow White was dying but not die yet. Then the seven dwarfs decided to make a beautiful bed made from a crystal coffin to make Snow White keep alive.
Day by day, the seven dwarfs waited for the miracle came when Snow White suddenly woke up.
 Then one day, there was a wanderer who actually a prince from far away kingdom saw a beautiful lady was laid down on crystal bed. The wanderer asked the dwarfs what was happened and the dwarfs told him the story.
Heard the Snow White's story, the princes decided to carry her to his Castle and asked the doctor to help her. Then the prince kissed her to show his intention. But suddenly Snow White was back to life. The fact was that the prince's kiss broke the spell. Then the prince asked Snow White to marry him.
From that day on, Snow White lived happily in a great castle. But from time to time, she was drawn back to visit the little cottage down in the forest.
4.      Explain why your sentence is called as the topic sentence?
Because it is located at the first sentence and it is the kind of general statement of the paragraph which is followed by the supporting sentences.

Selasa, 08 April 2014

NARRATIVE TEXT



narrative texs
Following the experience of the District Activity Paskira
Four years ago , I had a very interesting experience for critakan that when I follow paskiba activities in the district . When I take a test entry to be elected to the paskibra and very difficult to pass the test let alone to be elected to the township paskibra very difficult .
 I have to pass some very severe test , the first test I had to master the basic movements in paskibra because it is a basic capability that must be mastered by every member of paskibra which will become a member .
The second test is a physical test , a physical test is the most severe test in this test because I had to run around the basketball court as much as ten times without stopping after that I have to sit and do other physical activity that makes me feel very tired . Because in this test of physical strength I was really in the durability test if it does not pass the physical test will greatly influence the subsequent tests . After that passing a physical test that is draining it came time for the third test . The third test is a test of skill in movement marching , memorizing every command of the head of the line. And after all that passed arrive at the final test is to test is a test in which four should be able to follow all that is done by seniors who had already become a member paskibra mnejadi districts already coach , to follow all instructions given . After I did all the tests so tight I was very worried because a lot of those who take the test and not a few were very good in following each stage of the test is given .
All participants were very nice and very creative in performing these tests .
But I do not break the spirit because I'm pretty sure I would be accepted as a member of paskibra districts because I will also follow all the tests properly and also with very hard work to do it.
After waiting for several hours keputusanpun finally announced , I was really pounding waiting for the announcement of the decision . After the first name mentioned I was disappointed because the first received not me , after the first , second , third and fourth names mentioned turns out I entered the fifth and it makes me feel very happy because of my efforts to get satisfactory results and eventually I became a member I want paskibra districts .

Minggu, 30 Maret 2014




1.       how to write a paragraph with sufficient cohesion and inadequate is to use sentences stating dengaan integration anratara one another sentence. dam every sentence must salimg chime. because the sentence is a sentence cohesion that every element integrated internally in units of the text. Strictly speaking, each text component is born, for example, the current word is heard or read, are connected in series.
2.      cohesion sentence is a sentence that uses the phrase or words that are related or coherent. If the coherence associated with the content, the cohesion or coherency forms relating to the use of his words. It could be one of the main ideas put forward a paragraph, but not necessarily cohesive paragraphs that say if the words are not coherent.
3.      The difference between cohesion and coherence on something terpada or chime . In cohesion , which is integrated visible elements of text , including the structure of birth ( grammar ) . A fragment of a conversation two people following text can be used as an example .

" Hey , how are you ? " " Oh , you . Good news . Live where ? Still in the first place ? " " Yeah , that's where I stayed until now . "

All elements of the text fragment born in an integrated , both lexical and grammatical . Meanwhile , keberpaduan or coherence requires inner elements ( meaning , concepts , and knowledge ) combined with each other . For example , say " hello " is usually used by people who already know each other and not relative to each other are a little long conference . The first speaker utters it to the second and the second greeted with the familiar and signaled an understanding that they have not see you sing . What's more , the pengujar proceed with the next speech , which reinforces the interpretation that he felt he had not first meet with pengujar .
4.      examples paragraph :
lia is a good boy and also very clever child. lia as a very studious child, she was also a champion in his class. teachers and his friends love him. lia also has a polite and courteous person. lia parents are very proud of him, besides in school, are also in loved lia in the family, because lia diligently to help their parents, never denied or lounging at home.
lia friends while alin is very different he is very lazy and does not diligent. alin has a very bad person, opy is a very bad and also a lot of friends who hate her  because
her personality very bad.
lia in addition to many more people like him tetep be a good boy, and wants to be friends with anyone.
5.       The red line is said not to have good cohesiveness that the elusive idea. The paragraph needs to be improved, for example by providing a preposition.